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rhythmX
Sep 1st 2008, 08:18 AM
i just wrote down my thoughts & compose it to a poem

I wake up everyday fraught with depression
Where my soul is unable to find happiness
And feeling lost without spiritual guidance

Why am I grieving so much?
Perhaps my past, feelings & thoughts
I shouldn’t center myself in a futile condition
When I must focus on my faith & others
Life is temporary and can burst at anytime

Despite of the difficulties in life
To you my Lord I will surrender
In him, I shall find peace & eternal joy
I am yours, my Lord, my God, and my Savior



feel free to comment it :)

TRL1957
Sep 1st 2008, 09:21 PM
i just wrote down my thoughts & compose it to a poem

I wake up everyday fraught with depression
Where my soul is unable to find happiness
And feeling lost without spiritual guidance

Why am I grieving so much?
Perhaps my past, feelings & thoughts
I shouldn’t center myself in a futile condition
When I must focus on my faith & others
Life is temporary and can burst at anytime

Despite of the difficulties in life
To you my Lord I will surrender
In him, I shall find peace & eternal joy
I am yours, my Lord, my God, and my Savior



feel free to comment it :)
Very good poem. I can so relate to this, and thank you for sharing your heart:)

Trudie Myburgh
Sep 2nd 2008, 01:24 PM
I don't realy know how to express what this poem meant to me. It is as if you get caught up in these feelings and you know the way out, but you never realy grasp how easy it could be - Just touch the outstretched hand of our Loving Father. i was once trapped in a life filled with depression, but God showed me the way out, and I realy relate to this.

Hope this makes sence to u. Good poem, very much inspiring!

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