A really horrible lymric

[Clay Blucher]

But I'm nowhere near being a poet. This is really just something that came to me one day, and I've enjoyed it ever since. I know its a really bad poem, but maybe someone might get a smile out of it. :D


There once was a man from Galilee,
For salvation's sake, he was the key,
Who had to go die,
And made all the disciples cry,
But now he's raised so we're all full of glee.

[Theophilus]

There once was a fellow named Clay,
Who liked to write limericks all day.
He wrote one about Jesus
(and it really did please us).
Oh, Clay...Have you got more to say?

[ConqueredbyLove]

ConqueredbyLove claps and claps! You both did a great, great job!

I remember reading....somewhere in Scripture..."despise not the day of small beginnings"

Go for it! Both of you :hug:

[Theophilus]

ConqueredbyLove claps and claps! You both did a great, great job!

I remember reading....somewhere in Scripture..."despise not the day of small beginnings"

Go for it! Both of you :hug:
You may not really want to let this particular genie out of the bottle...;)
http://bibleforums.org/forum/showthread.php?t=46117

[ConqueredbyLove]

You may not really want to let this particular genie out of the bottle...;)
http://bibleforums.org/forum/showthread.php?t=46117

Can't wait to read through it! Looks too fun :)

[SFASH]

These are actually great lymerics-nothing remotely horrible about them.
And they are true lymerics (metrical)!

[paidforinfull]

But I'm nowhere near being a poet. This is really just something that came to me one day, and I've enjoyed it ever since. I know its a really bad poem, but maybe someone might get a smile out of it. :D


There once was a man from Galilee,
For salvation's sake, he was the key,
Who had to go die,
And made all the disciples cry,
But now he's raised so we're all full of glee.

Not so horrible, but very true after all. Well done!:agree: