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Beloved by God

Sep 30th 2008, 03:08 AM

Give Me What I Need

Give me the words God give me the knowledge
Give me understanding that I may reach them
And help turn them from their path of death
And put them on Your path of life
Help me to sound reassuring
Help me to show your grace and mercy
Give me patients and divine understanding
So that I may help heal their hurts
Please let me not be a broken record
Help me to be fresh and new
So that they will take notice and wonder
Let them wonder at Your words of wisdom
Let my mouth speak the truth
Moses asked for help
And maybe I need an Aaron too
Please Lord, give me what I need
So that I may help others

©Symanntha Renn

TRL1957

Sep 30th 2008, 03:19 AM

What a beautiful poem/prayer.:hug:

Beloved by God

Sep 30th 2008, 03:22 AM

paidforinfull

Sep 30th 2008, 01:15 PM

I almost trashed this one too and my husband said he thought it was one of my better ones. I am finding that the ones I think are really great people don't always respond to, but the ones I feel are just me going blah, blah blah... people like.
Yep - I know the feeling. I laughed so much when I read your comment. Good one! And good poem too;). God bless.

Itisfinished

Sep 30th 2008, 04:21 PM

This was an awesome piece of poetry and a simply lovely prayer, the bible instructs us to seek, ask, and knock, not that God dosnt know but we ought to trust him enough to cast our cares on him for he cares for us. I like the part where you asked for and "Aaron too" nicely done. I enjoyed the read. Peace and blessings to you

Beloved by God

Sep 30th 2008, 11:45 PM

Thank You so much guys! :pp :hug:

verseode

Oct 7th 2008, 05:54 AM

I wrote Onion on the computer,having only the first two lines.I wasn't that impressed with it but I have learnt that everything is worthwhile to someone and I have already had a lot of comments back from various sites.Try putting your poems on http://christianpoetry.org/ God Bless,Mike.