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    Something Unique

    The earth was without form and bare.
    A state the Lord couldn't forbear;
    He made it a place for man,
    and set about His wonderful plan.

    The silent dark gave no delight
    so He created day and night;
    put life upon the earth straightway,
    and formed the first man, made of clay.

    Gave him essence and breath of life,
    and from a rib made Eve, his wife.
    Yet sin came in, creating strife;
    and mankind lost eternal life.

    God's garden was disturbed within;
    they stained their soul, and let death in;
    God's children struggled to survive,
    till Christ the Savior could arrive.

    The Holy One was God's device:
    a man, whose teaching did suffice
    to save mankind; He gave his all
    that sin would not our lives befall.

    No one could know that He would rise.
    He conquered death---the soul's demise.
    Christ welcomes all who will repent,
    whose hearts and minds are heaven-bent.

    By Bootie

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    Very Good...

    Very good poem and very well done. Keep on writing and rhyming and remember, Charity never faileth!

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    This is an excellent, spirit filled poem and I like it very much.
    God bless

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    PastorMike,

    Thank you for your reply and I appreciate the time it took to look my piece over.

    God Bless,
    Bootie

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    TRL1957,

    Thank you for your reply and your comments. I wrote this a while back and someone helped me with a few changes.

    God Bless,
    Bootie

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    I love it!! Keep up the amazing work, Bootie.
    Thank You, Jesus for everything.

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    Godsamazinggrace77,

    Thank you for your comment and I appreciate your comments. You always have something nice to say.

    Bootie

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