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    My friend nearly broke down in tears the other night at youthgroup because she's been advertising her high schools Fellowship of Christian Athletes club for quite a long time now and their meetings only consist of about 4-5 people. We came up with a few ideas and one was to make tee shirts. I took on the task of designing them and also offered to pay for the first 10-15 shirts, which is preeetttyyy expensive. So I finished the design and need opinions. Keep in mind, it's a simple design because anything too much more would be incredibly expensive. Also, I don't know why the F in harford is faded but I intend to fix it.



    Thanks!
    -Bo
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  • #2
    I like the design Bo! Good job.
    Matt 9:13
    13 "But go and learn what this means: ' I DESIRE COMPASSION,AND NOT SACRIFICE,' for I did not come to call the righteous, but sinners."
    NASU

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    • #3
      I like it just the way it is.

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      • #4
        Oh wow, man, I also really like it just the way it is! Seriously. I think it looks great.

        Do you think T-shirts will really help participation though? Maybe fliers or something to get more participation and THEN give members shirts? If only 5 people are attending...

        But regardless, still an outstanding job! And I don't think the "F" is faded. I like the way it wraps to the top and bottom.

        Richard gives his

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        • #5
          Originally posted by boflex007 View Post
          Keep in mind, it's a simple design because anything too much more would be incredibly expensive.
          Simple and cheap isn't bad. Most of my designs are minimalistic in nature ("simple"), yet I've had professional designers tell me they were awesome designs.

          If you're looking for pointers, move "harford" to another position, so that it's not covered up by "north."

          Otherwise, the design is pretty sweet.
          To This Day

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          • #6
            Thanks for all the comments.

            My intention was to have a very tiny portion of Harford covered by north, and a very tiny portion of FCA covered by Harford, to give it like an overlapping sort of feel. But in hindsight it does look a little smushed.

            And yeah, we've also gotten together and designed a few flyer layouts and a couple posters to put around school. And prayed about it of course.
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            • #7
              Assuming the C stands for 'Christian' I wonder if it might make the message clearer if you replaced it with a Cross?

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              • #8
                My only recommendation would be to overlay the words the oposite direction, that also may fix the "f" being faded.

                Otherwise i think it looks great !!!

                Shalom,
                Tanja
                Jer 6:16 Thus says the Lord: Stand at the crossroads, and look, and ask for the ancient paths, where the good way lies; and walk in it, and find rest for your souls.
                2Jn 1:9 Everyone who goes on ahead and does not abide in the teaching of Christ, does not have God. Whoever abides in the teaching has both the Father and the Son.
                If it's not done out of unselfish love, then it's hardly righteous.
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                • #9
                  I like it! it looks really good...also...

                  did you do this?

                  this is amazing

                  xPurity Through Resistancex

                  Straight Edge


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                  • #10
                    Good Idea

                    Advertisings with the shirts is a good idea. . It does not break any rules at the school. . Other kids may ask them about the shirts and this club. .

                    However when I was in school I probably would have not joined this club. . I could not openly tell other about Jesus. I was too embarrassed about him in my young days.

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                    • #11
                      Well done, good job there mate!

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